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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 3:04:42 GMT -5
THE PROMISE - An Etheree
Sun glaze merges with pale blue sky, silken
winds mingle amongst trees, in her hand
she cradles a crumpled piece of
paper stating his promise
to return to her, this
morning she was told
her husband had
died on the
battle
field
�2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Brian on Apr 10, 2011 3:10:42 GMT -5
a poignant write told with much grace and excellence 
thanks for te great read thsi morning Lisa 
have a great day  
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 3:12:05 GMT -5
thanks so much Brian
you have a great day too
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Post by Reggie on Apr 10, 2011 3:18:52 GMT -5
a fine write Lisa that is very well-told and expressed
I hope you have a wonderful Sunday
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 3:22:19 GMT -5
thanks so much Reg, you have a great day too!
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Post by bridge on Apr 10, 2011 3:27:53 GMT -5
this one is an attention grabber, well-done Lisa
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Post by Kristi on Apr 10, 2011 3:31:52 GMT -5
a most solid and strong wirte Lisa 
your poem says so much 
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Post by Rose on Apr 10, 2011 4:04:04 GMT -5
well-written Lisa!
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Post by Billy on Apr 10, 2011 10:36:10 GMT -5
wonderfully written Lisa, a powrhouse write!
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Post by Tamika on Apr 10, 2011 10:47:30 GMT -5
::)a spectacular write Lisa, it was a great pleasure to read you this morning
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 10:47:46 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 10:48:24 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 10:50:24 GMT -5
thanks so much for commenting dear Rose
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 10:51:22 GMT -5
wonderfully written Lisa, a powrhouse write! |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 10, 2011 10:54:35 GMT -5
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
