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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 4:42:53 GMT -5
ANOTHER DAY’S PASSING
ginger-rust sky cold river streams blank echoes whisper beyond towering trees eerie silence beckons clock ticking on mantel, TV on to keep her from feeling so alone from behind veiled curtain, she watches night fall dreading another day’s passing
©2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by ciara on May 13, 2011 4:55:24 GMT -5
Hi Lisa
great flow and solid imagery...well-done
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 5:03:59 GMT -5
thanks Ciara!
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Post by Reggie on May 13, 2011 5:08:03 GMT -5
:-/an excellent write dear lady
thanks for the great read
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 5:09:15 GMT -5
thanks so much Reg!
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Post by Tina on May 13, 2011 5:48:37 GMT -5
magnificent write Lisa
CONGRATS to you for the TOAST OF THE WEEK
ENJOY your award
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Post by Joan on May 13, 2011 5:52:24 GMT -5
:oCONGRATULATIONS Lisa
wonderful job as always
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Post by Dana on May 13, 2011 5:57:48 GMT -5
::)a strong and concise write Lisa, CONGRATS on the TOTW
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Post by Brian on May 13, 2011 6:03:51 GMT -5
wonderfully penned Lisa I love the story of this piece... nice job
CONGRATULATIONS on the TOAST OF THE WEEK
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 6:07:52 GMT -5
thanks so much dear Tina
I much appreciate the award and kind words
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 6:08:40 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 6:09:37 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 6:10:27 GMT -5
thanks Brian
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Post by bridge on May 13, 2011 6:28:02 GMT -5
CONGRATS to you Lisa
::)excellent write
I enjoyed the read this morning
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 13, 2011 6:29:07 GMT -5
thanks so much Dan!
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