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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 3:20:46 GMT -5
PALE MOON BLACK SKY
swift winds battle
impregnated raindrops descend
pale moon black sky
© 2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Lola on Nov 3, 2011 3:31:36 GMT -5
love it Lisa, good read!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 3:32:58 GMT -5
thanks Lola!
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Post by Lee on Nov 3, 2011 3:36:58 GMT -5
another gem from you 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 7:45:02 GMT -5
another gem from you  |
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Post by Sara on Nov 3, 2011 7:47:44 GMT -5
a beauty of a ku Lisa!
thanks for the nice read!
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Post by ciara on Nov 3, 2011 8:14:53 GMT -5
great job Lisa 
love that second line "impregnated raindrops descend"
luscious write
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Post by percy on Nov 3, 2011 8:18:40 GMT -5
excellent title and vivid imagery...a most solid ku 
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Post by Joan on Nov 3, 2011 10:21:04 GMT -5
well-done my friend!
thanks:)
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 13:17:33 GMT -5
a beauty of a ku Lisa! thanks for the nice read!  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 13:18:15 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 13:18:52 GMT -5
excellent title and vivid imagery...a most solid ku |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 13:19:40 GMT -5
well-done my friend! thanks:)  |
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Post by michaelgallatin on Nov 3, 2011 14:33:54 GMT -5
Descriptive and well done but sounds like a dark, wet and chilly night. Take care, Mike
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 3, 2011 20:57:11 GMT -5
thanks Mike!
you take care too:)
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
