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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 2:49:11 GMT -5
DEVIL WINDS CALL
time
wears thin
minutes tick
life eludes her
yet again, nightfall
settles, cold of air stirs
beneath her soul pain wrestles
death of her would be merciful
one last shot of bittersweet bourbon
beyond open window devil winds call
©2011 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Sierra on Nov 16, 2011 3:07:04 GMT -5
Hello Lisa 
it's been awhile since I have visited Echoes, I miss the place so much, but I am busy with work 
:Pexcellent poem as always 
I hope to visit the site more often, take care 
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Post by bridge on Nov 16, 2011 7:15:03 GMT -5
great poem Lisa, soild and bold. I much like this one!
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Post by Reggie on Nov 16, 2011 7:56:43 GMT -5
I like the way you lead the reader in this one...great imagery and style...I much enjoyed  your work 
have a great day sunshine
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Post by Lily on Nov 16, 2011 8:39:19 GMT -5
great detail...it tells a story
well-done Lisa!
have a nice day!
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Post by Joan on Nov 16, 2011 13:33:17 GMT -5
another wonderful write from your pen dear Lisa
hope you are enjoying your day
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Post by ciara on Nov 16, 2011 16:54:25 GMT -5
fantastic Etheree poetry Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:15:29 GMT -5
thanks Sierra
I hope to see you aroud more, take care
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:16:20 GMT -5
great poem Lisa, soild and bold. I much like this one!  |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:17:18 GMT -5
thanks so much dear Reg, I always love hearing from you, love ya much
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:18:08 GMT -5
great detail...it tells a story well-done Lisa! have a nice day! |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:18:53 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 16, 2011 17:19:39 GMT -5
fantastic Etheree poetry Lisa! |
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Post by Tamika on Nov 16, 2011 17:45:56 GMT -5
wow and oh wow Lisa, just super fantastic, love you this evening
take care and have a great night, much love to you dear friend
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Post by Brian on Nov 16, 2011 18:01:03 GMT -5
such a strong and powerful write, great job Lisa!
poignantly written!
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your work 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
