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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 21, 2012 4:10:16 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 21, 2012 4:12:22 GMT -5
Hi Lias, I remember this one from another site...it is a very well-crafted and written poem, I just love the ways it turns out! thanks Lola
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Post by Alicia on Jan 21, 2012 4:21:44 GMT -5
love it Lisa!
have a great weekend and thanks for sharing and posting!
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Post by Reggie on Jan 21, 2012 4:39:42 GMT -5
great detail, tone and emotion
a solid and well-written piece
thanks for the great read, sunshine
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Post by Jack on Jan 21, 2012 10:12:19 GMT -5
I do not believe I have seen this one either... ::)wonderfully penned Lisa...excellent ending
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Post by ciara on Jan 21, 2012 10:14:25 GMT -5
strong write Lisa, I love it!
thanks for posting and have a great weekend!
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Post by Eddie on Jan 21, 2012 10:56:57 GMT -5
wonderful job Lisa, thanks for sharing:)
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Post by Lily on Jan 21, 2012 11:08:49 GMT -5
I love it too, great pace and tone!
fantastic ending!
have a wonderful weekend Lisa!
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Post by Dana on Jan 21, 2012 11:09:19 GMT -5
great style, depth and tone, soild all aroud write as always Lisa
I like it more today than when I first read it
ENJOY your weekend
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Post by Silent-One on Jan 21, 2012 18:24:09 GMT -5
fantastic write Lisa, it has always been a favoirite of mine, keep up the great work and have a wonderful weekend!
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Post by rico on Jan 22, 2012 1:22:27 GMT -5
a fine poem, Lisa, thanks for posting and have a great weekend!
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Post by Billy on Jan 22, 2012 2:10:22 GMT -5
great write Lisa, thanks!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:44:06 GMT -5
l ove it Lisa!
have a great weekend and thanks for sharing and posting! many thanks dear Alicia
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:45:02 GMT -5
many thanks dear Reg, love ya
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 22, 2012 3:45:52 GMT -5
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