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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 9, 2005 6:28:24 GMT -5
beneath my longing soul breathes wanton desire; uncertainty and doubt holds me captive
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Post by Bob on Jun 9, 2005 6:37:12 GMT -5
very well done, you have this form mastered:)
you put so much emotion in such a short piece, great work!
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Post by Helen on Jun 9, 2005 6:51:23 GMT -5
very nice cinquain, Lisa, you make these look easy to write:)
I tried this form, and I couldn't grasp it, lol.
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Post by Brian on Jun 9, 2005 7:09:39 GMT -5
good job! It has great depth and emotion, and it grabs the reader's attention, nice work!
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Post by Cherrie on Jun 9, 2005 7:32:01 GMT -5
very well composed, good write!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 9, 2005 8:00:46 GMT -5
thank you so much Bob, Helen, Brian and Cherrie! I love to write these:)
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Post by mark on Jun 9, 2005 17:45:24 GMT -5
good job:)
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Post by ciara on Jun 9, 2005 18:13:26 GMT -5
you have complete control over this form, very well expressed!
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Post by Sharon on Jun 9, 2005 18:26:39 GMT -5
very well penned!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 9, 2005 19:22:38 GMT -5
thank you much, Mark, ciara and Sharon:)
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