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Post by Lee on Mar 3, 2006 6:41:42 GMT -5
not sure about the title suggestion from Jay, but this is my kind of read, smoothe and vivid, great write, Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 3, 2006 21:00:26 GMT -5
thanks Jay, Bri and Lee...I will think that title change over, I do like the suggestion!
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Post by Sharon on Mar 4, 2006 4:06:46 GMT -5
keep the title as it is, I like it...this is a good write, love the easy flow and vivid visuals, you have a way of making one feel they are there....
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Post by Brianna on Mar 5, 2006 9:08:36 GMT -5
Lisa, I missed this one, sorry about that  you have wove a delicate and beautiful write, nice imagery in this one...well-crafted and true to form  |
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Post by Daboetry on Mar 5, 2006 15:46:27 GMT -5
Oh Wow Lisa, this was Beautifully written. Your words just dance throughout this nonet. That's something that I might try..
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Post by Helen on Mar 6, 2006 21:54:35 GMT -5
love this one, Lisa
great colorful imagery
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 7, 2006 9:50:51 GMT -5
thanks all, I appreciate the comments:)
yeah Dab, you should give it a try they are fun to write!
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Post by Kristi on Mar 7, 2006 23:23:23 GMT -5
well done |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 8, 2006 2:53:00 GMT -5
many thanks, Kristi |
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Post by Silent-One on Mar 8, 2006 5:56:17 GMT -5
beautiful words you have wove here, nice work indeed
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Post by Silent-One on Mar 8, 2006 5:59:42 GMT -5
btw, I would keep your original title:)
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Post by countrygalcc on Mar 8, 2006 11:08:43 GMT -5
Very good work Lisa. I wish I could write this style of poetry.
Beautiful. My mind is just in the sun burning all kinds of words.
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Post by ken on Mar 9, 2006 8:12:53 GMT -5
great form, good imagery in this, nicely penned
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 11, 2006 6:58:32 GMT -5
thanks so much silentone, Misty and Ken!
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Post by Treasure on Mar 12, 2006 8:04:33 GMT -5
This is a good write, I don't come across this type of poem often, true to form, your images sparkle, love that first line
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echoes, hope you all are doing well 
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
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