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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 7:27:59 GMT -5
SHADOW’S VEIL
hushed silhouette breezes tango
honey lips dare whisper his name
when dawn gently awakes, he
will not be beside her
alone she will face
another day
looking through
shadow’s
veil
©2012 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Feb 28, 2012 7:41:53 GMT -5
excellent Nonet poetry Lisa 
only as you can write them  !
love every single line 
thanks for the fantastic read before I head off to work 
I am out the 
have a great day  
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Post by Brian on Feb 28, 2012 7:52:46 GMT -5
:Plove it Lisa, nice job
you really have a way of writing these, we do not see them much online and it is nice that you continue to share yours with the Echoes Fam, love ya
have a beautiful Tuesday
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Post by ciara on Feb 28, 2012 8:01:59 GMT -5
magnificent poem Lisa
I love this form
it was so good to come here and read you today
have a wonderful day
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Post by Joy on Feb 28, 2012 8:13:23 GMT -5
fantastic job as always Lisa, enjoyed the read, thanks!
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Post by trina on Feb 28, 2012 8:17:32 GMT -5
very nice Lisa, I like the way you craft and present this, good stuff!
have a wonderful day
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Post by Bob on Feb 28, 2012 8:47:50 GMT -5
magnificent job Lisa, thanks for the great read, I am off to work have a blessed day!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 9:58:21 GMT -5
many thanks dear Betty, you have a great day too
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 9:59:25 GMT -5
thanks so much Brian
you have a wonderful day too
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 10:12:42 GMT -5
thanks so much Ciara
you have a great day too
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 10:15:28 GMT -5
fantastic job as always Lisa, enjoyed the read, thanks! |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 10:16:44 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 10:18:10 GMT -5
magnificent job Lisa, thanks for the great read, I am off to work have a blessed day! |
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Post by Jack on Feb 28, 2012 10:21:53 GMT -5
solid imagery used, very nice nonet, Lisa!
thanks for the great read!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Feb 28, 2012 10:23:27 GMT -5
thanks Jack, you have a great day!
I am heading back to my writing!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
