Disembarked

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Disembarked Mar 10, 2010 12:56:19 GMT -5

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Post by lovepoet on Mar 10, 2010 12:56:19 GMT -5

Disembarked

Spring is here there is no doubt,
Flowers reveal the joyful truth
That winter lost now all about,
Is disembarked by springtime youth.
Really it seemed to never leave,
Stayed stubborn in the garden beds,
Green ivy, the only coloured weave,
Now mixed with hundred flower heads.

Spring banished ice time yet for good,
Freed all creatures from any hood.

Last Edit: Mar 10, 2010 13:01:18 GMT -5 by lovepoet

moontear Echoes Family Member Posts: 2,689	Disembarked Mar 11, 2010 2:08:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by moontear on Mar 11, 2010 2:08:24 GMT -5 Yah spring! This is lively with lots of energy which I like. I also like your last line and all the rhymes. Very sweet poem, much enjoyed!
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johan Echoes Family Member Just me:The Watering Place of Good Peace can only be the long sleep of eternity. Posts: 4,464	Disembarked Mar 11, 2010 4:17:40 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by johan on Mar 11, 2010 4:17:40 GMT -5 Bravo Lovepoet, great poetry. Johan
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Sharon Assistant Administrator[/size] Believe and Achieve Posts: 2,430	Disembarked Mar 11, 2010 7:52:34 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Sharon on Mar 11, 2010 7:52:34 GMT -5 great write and read!
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purplespirit Echoes Family Member Posts: 5,455	Disembarked Mar 11, 2010 13:03:19 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by purplespirit on Mar 11, 2010 13:03:19 GMT -5 Loved this poem LP, really we could also say here "winter sat stubborn in the garden beds", there seems no end to it and we all long for warmth. Enjoyed it, thank you. Ulla xx

rainbowrider Echoes Family Member nature's own Posts: 1,540	Disembarked Mar 12, 2010 20:23:42 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rainbowrider on Mar 12, 2010 20:23:42 GMT -5 An ever pleasing cycle we long to discover once again, RR
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heart2heart Echoes Family Member Yep, that's me ! Posts: 4,044	Disembarked Mar 13, 2010 3:16:51 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by heart2heart on Mar 13, 2010 3:16:51 GMT -5 Lovely beyond belief, and I do adore those words "really it seemed never to leave", such hope and joy in those words. Beautiful poesy Lovepoet ! Heart2Heart
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Disembarked Mar 14, 2010 10:40:34 GMT -5

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Post by lovepoet on Mar 14, 2010 10:40:34 GMT -5

Thanx Karen for being first with your fine comment.

Very kind of you Johan, thanx!

Sharon, how nice to see you turn up, thanx!

Your comment made me smile Ulla, thanx!

You brought the rainbow to the sky RR, thanx for commenting!

Springtime-Hopes from heart to heart, thanx Heart2Heart!

The Great Fulcanelli Echoes Full Member "Magic is the means by which we transform our own consciousness." Posts: 241	Disembarked Jan 2, 2012 20:23:24 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Jan 2, 2012 20:23:24 GMT -5 It seems good and pretty decent, but that last line seemed a trifle out of place. But the rest is good stuff!
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jbstillwater Echoes Family Member Holiday Word Gifts, in bookstores around the world Posts: 2,779	Disembarked Jan 3, 2012 16:40:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by jbstillwater on Jan 3, 2012 16:40:25 GMT -5 Beautiful, unfortunately my own garden is covered in snow but this poem has helped me to visualize what comes next! Caugaht a metaphor in these lines poet, excellent! Jan
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