Versitile Voices

[frankievon]

The voices entice me in ways of woe
From where they derived I do not know
vastly profound versatile with sound
They tell me "get up!...and look around"
In keen observation I succumb...abdication
For I lead me astray on a path to dismay
So I forfeit this vessel
where I solemnly nestled
So next time we cross
An I appear at a loss
Gaze in my eyes and you may be surprised
For the memories we shared
Are now willingly lost...

[michaelgallatin]

Small observation, did you want "and" rather than "an" at the start of Line 10? A poem of confusion and loss, quite sad. I once did a poem about a girl with multiple personality disorder who kills herself. I called it 'Sue I. Cide". Had the perspective of each personality just before the end. That was an extremely tragic poem and even a bit scary to write!

Take care,
Mike

PS - I can't hear you and all the voices in my head at the same time!

[frankievon]

actually no it was and but i decided to go with an

[johan]

Interesting poetry from you my friend, great piece.

Johan

[The Great Fulcanelli]

This one has plenty of potential. Thank you for sharing!