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rustybroadspear
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Proposal Jan 2, 2012 19:37:07 GMT -5

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Post by rustybroadspear on Jan 2, 2012 19:37:07 GMT -5

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Conversation in bright sunlight
Scattered giggles and laughter
Words in flight
Hands loosely linked, arms swinging
Walking with a rhythmic skip
Love is singing
Love is playing. Hips swaying in accord
Warmth without and warmth within
Adoration is abroad

Busy street filled with feet
They stop. He gets down on one knee
Souls meet. Feet stop. Heartbeat.
She screams a resounding ‘YES!!’
My feet move in unison with others
Yet we cheer this Prince and Princess.
They stand and twirl and hug real tight
Only eyes speak the language of love
Words burn blindingly bright

And the humdrum lives that bore witness
Including the uninteresting unexceptional me
Were injected with a bigness and a hipness
That surpassed grandiosity.

If time was on rewind
I would zap back to that day
Pause, then hold
And behold that one day
We found ourselves in such disarray.

The Great Fulcanelli Echoes Full Member "Magic is the means by which we transform our own consciousness." Posts: 241	Proposal Jan 2, 2012 20:14:55 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by The Great Fulcanelli on Jan 2, 2012 20:14:55 GMT -5 Was this how it really happened for you? ah, how lucky if it was!
	"The coming to presence of technology threatens revealing, threatens it with the possibility that all revealing will be consumed in ordering and that everything will present itself only in the unconcealedness of standing-reserve." — Martin Heidegger, Die Frage Nach Der Technik

johan Echoes Family Member Just me:The Watering Place of Good Peace can only be the long sleep of eternity. Posts: 4,464	Proposal Jan 3, 2012 9:18:23 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by johan on Jan 3, 2012 9:18:23 GMT -5 Interesting and great read my friend, enjoyed the way you put this together. Johan
	The Sad Sailor. Poetry by Johan (Andrew Shiston) can be found as a guest poet on the excellent site of writer and published poet JB Stillwater. www.jbstillwater.com Johan voted poet of the year 2007. My book 'A Bay of Skeletons' is now on sale at Author House My new book 'Diary of a Merchant Seaman' is now being published, out in the spring published by Casa De Snapdragon. JBStillwater (Jan

rrw Echoes Family Member You gotta move Posts: 5,998	Proposal Jan 3, 2012 12:20:12 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by rrw on Jan 3, 2012 12:20:12 GMT -5 Yeah, Rusty, I like the fluidity of the piece... the story moves along very well... particularly in the second section on... lovely work.