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Jan 2, 2012 22:57:00 GMT -5
Post by rrw on Jan 2, 2012 22:57:00 GMT -5
The evergreen scratches at the window, growls a sound not unlike that which sleeping dogs make while dreaming cats.
Outside my apartment, thinned and muddied by a sudden rain, the last handful of evening traffic wanders by.... A thousand foot thought quivers in my head, a moth trapped indoors by the dirty screen on the only open window in the house.... Yes, a way out it seems but... no, it’s not.
My unkind words chip away at whatever self-respect I have left. Your face turns to sour milk.
Once my tongue played with you, stuck itself outside my mouth to tease or just to wipe the strawberry ice cream from your face... You always said that was gross... then laughed like a little girl.
No laugher this evening as you pack everything you own (clothes, CDs, a hair brush, a number of smelly, bottled lotions I never saw you use), you cram everything into one small suitcase, the one with the broken zipper, everything you loved shoved into leaving, everything except me. And my tongue just can’t do anything right, unreasonably it believes that if it whips you hard enough you might stay. But of course, you won’t.
In the damp parking lot a little girl screams with fake fear, her taller brother chases after her handfuls of soggy autumn leaves cocked and ready to do mischief.... But she’s too damn quick witted for that! She zigs and zags she screams and laughs and yells, “You better not!” But the boy won’t listen. The same way I never listened to you.—rrw 1-2-12
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Jan 3, 2012 9:07:08 GMT -5
Post by johan on Jan 3, 2012 9:07:08 GMT -5
Now this ones a corker Rob, just enjoy the way you meander, yet make the perfect poem, again and getting the jist of the each stanza, brilliant my friend. Johan
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Jan 3, 2012 12:17:01 GMT -5
Post by rrw on Jan 3, 2012 12:17:01 GMT -5
Thanks, Johan! Experimenting with the storytelling idea a bit more these days.
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Jan 3, 2012 16:26:26 GMT -5
Post by jbstillwater on Jan 3, 2012 16:26:26 GMT -5
I don't think I have read this one before, new? Visually perfect, reaches out through the dirty screen and beyond of life, and shows your own quandry about sometimes not giving the attention you feel that you should, straight to the heart, Robert!
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Jan 3, 2012 23:29:34 GMT -5
Post by rrw on Jan 3, 2012 23:29:34 GMT -5
Yeah, all this is new stuff... been taking some classes this semester, three books on craft and studying some poets. Nice, I think, to take a break... just sort of got back to it.
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Jan 5, 2012 13:26:42 GMT -5
Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 5, 2012 13:26:42 GMT -5
As stated under a poem I recently wrote. I know a number of family and friends who are divorced. My own marriage has been up and down and isn't what it used to be. And days ago I found out that my best friend and his wife (I think it's 26 years, two "children") are now separated as a new year arrives. My God Rob, it's all so damned sad! So, this poem certainly hit home with me! Well done but also so very sad!
Take care, Mike
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Jan 5, 2012 18:57:30 GMT -5
Post by rrw on Jan 5, 2012 18:57:30 GMT -5
Thanks, Mike, the key I think to writing this "very sad" stuff is to allow it to just be what it is... make it active... at least I'm hoping that's it...
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