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Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 6, 2012 8:41:12 GMT -5
Love's an old hooker and I know she seems kind. Yet she'll step on your feelings and mess up your mind.
Sure she can look pretty and glad that you came. But to her it's all cheap and just part of the game.
What do you want from a lady who spends life on her back? Now you're into the light you can see there's a lack.
Not looking as good as she did in the night? And once you really see her you want to take flight?
But my friend you still want her and you know that's so true. So maybe with makeup she'll still look good to you.
Michael "Cosmetics Rule!" Gallatin
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Post by trina on Jan 6, 2012 9:35:05 GMT -5
I like your style, good job!
I much enjoyed the read!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 6, 2012 16:31:20 GMT -5
very good job Mike, great style and sense of story, thanks for the post!
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Post by rustybroadspear on Jan 6, 2012 16:56:54 GMT -5
took your advice Mike and 'dolled up' the missus's face when she was asleep. in the morning she wasn't impressed (neither was I, I'd made a complete mess.
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Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 6, 2012 19:37:12 GMT -5
I like your style, good job! I much enjoyed the read! Nice to meet you and thanks for the compliment! I'll look for your poems. Take care, Mike
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Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 6, 2012 19:38:50 GMT -5
very good job Mike, great style and sense of story, thanks for the post! A somewhat sad story it is too but as always I appreciate what you have to say. Namaste, Mike
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Post by michaelgallatin on Jan 6, 2012 19:42:22 GMT -5
took your advice Mike and 'dolled up' the missus's face when she was asleep. in the morning she wasn't impressed (neither was I, I'd made a complete mess. Oh my Lord guy, thanks so much for the best laugh I've had today! One of the best in some time! Now that, my friend, is seriously funny. Only got to say this! If she's pissed, don't send her my way! I've got enough issues with my own sweet lady! ROTFL, Mike PS - It's not easy to turn a rather depressing poem into a hilarious joke but you did quite well. And please, please tell your wife that I don't think of her as a hooker! I suggest you'd better not either!
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