hoby
Echoes Member
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Post by hoby on Dec 16, 2011 12:43:44 GMT -5
We wish the dawn would come Is it the wish of all or the wish of some?
We wish the sun would rise. And send its rays to the world. We wish the people stop their cries And say their great word
We wish a new day would begin So we can plan our future with no sin.
We wish the revolution would grant freedom to all So all mistakes and sins would start to fall
We wish the dawn would come That's the wish of all not the wish of some.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 16, 2011 16:21:19 GMT -5
well done Hoby!
it is wonderful to see you posting again and I hope to read more from you, thanks for the fine post!
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Post by percy on Dec 16, 2011 18:55:21 GMT -5
wonderul poem, well-crafted and told, I much enjoyed the read, thank you
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Post by rrw on Dec 17, 2011 13:55:07 GMT -5
Nice work hoby!
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Post by purplespirit on Dec 18, 2011 13:03:18 GMT -5
Oh yes -- we wish!!! -- Great write hoby thank you. Ulla xx
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Post by rustybroadspear on Dec 18, 2011 14:54:54 GMT -5
simple, heartfelt and true - for most of us anyway ................
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Post by johan on Dec 28, 2011 15:52:37 GMT -5
A warm welcome to Echoes Holly, a very nicely written poem.
Johan
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Post by Brian on Jan 1, 2012 8:45:09 GMT -5
very nice poem, thanks for sharing!
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