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Post by davelyoung1 on Nov 28, 2011 13:53:02 GMT -5
Lover’s Trail Trial (2011)
The wind’s wind-up the turmoil in my heart twisting one all around, Where a mind whirls and twirls in memories swirling inside out. When true feelings are boiling and toiling, why should I still care, Walking down winding trails misting in the morning tear drop dew.
Mental fog drift heavy in gravity’s pit of lost and found feelings, Where the focus reigns inside the past, when love was bright sunshine, So blinding ecstatic - it erases doubts; until time created this lover’s static, Where things got overcast, when one lie destroyed that mutual harmony.
Love crashed and burned, destroying Trust that Bonds Truth’s Foundation. Miniscule crack that grows under strain and stress of lover’s pressure duress. Where silence grows resentment in scorn, so forlorn, love is almost morbid, Then explodes, where everything come tumbling down with love’s vengeance.
Verbal words sword points penetrate to wound “Your Love” for a lifetime, Where any blow, no matter how small, creates lifelong bruised hostility. That any verbal and physical abuse will dwell deep in memories dark well. Where you walk alone, wondering why thorns of the past still bleed in – Lost feelings of love.
David Lester Young 11/23/11 ©
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Post by davelyoung1 on Nov 28, 2011 13:58:34 GMT -5
First thing is that this is a thought, not an actual experience. It is about thinking out things before you are on this trail.
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Post by jbstillwater on Nov 28, 2011 14:30:55 GMT -5
So true, Dave "life leaves its deep and tender mark" does it not?
Great writingt! huggs-Jan
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Post by johan on Nov 29, 2011 11:18:24 GMT -5
As always Dave you bring pen to paper and write great pieces of poetry.
Johan
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Post by rustybroadspear on Nov 29, 2011 14:07:09 GMT -5
stick a plaster over a cut and wait for it to heal - mental scars may hide but they don't heal ...
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Post by davelyoung1 on Nov 29, 2011 21:25:01 GMT -5
Thanks Johan and rustybroadspear.
The veins in words are not always positive but at times must carry the gravity of grave words nailing in the coffin scream that we must crawl to weep our flood of tears.
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Post by purplespirit on Nov 30, 2011 12:44:39 GMT -5
Great and much appreciated piece of poetry and as always this one is profound and giving thoughts, thank you. Ulla xx
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 7, 2011 22:35:49 GMT -5
great writing, thanks for the post!
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