|
|
Post by davelyoung1 on Nov 24, 2011 23:23:14 GMT -5
Poetic eloquence of the mastery of the woven word.
|
|
|
|
Post by trina on Nov 25, 2011 14:28:10 GMT -5
excellent poetry, my belated CONGRATS to you for POTD!
|
|
|
|
Post by rico on Nov 26, 2011 7:34:32 GMT -5
a great read, well-done!
beautiful picture as well
|
|
|
|
Post by Lola on Nov 26, 2011 16:37:12 GMT -5
beautifully written, my belated CONGRATS to you for POTD!
|
|
|
|
Post by jbstillwater on Nov 28, 2011 14:24:11 GMT -5
Gees Louise and Mother Mary!!!! Thanx so much, guys . . . yes, Katriona, you are absolutely correct, we do know this seaman..(lol) Yes Larsen, we have met before, and you are right on with the symbolism and metaphor in this poem. I am also writing about the green wave, a phenomenon that happens at sea when a huge wave, not broken and washes over the ship, again a metaphor in the damage it can do to an unsuspecting soul. Andrew, this poem is for you.
Huggs to all - Jan
|
|
|
|
Post by johan on Dec 1, 2011 8:08:46 GMT -5
I just had to return to this Jan, again I enjoyed  this, worthy of any award. Andrew |
|
|
|
Post by jbstillwater on Dec 5, 2011 17:50:18 GMT -5
Well, I had an excellent muse for this one, A...
|
|
this, worthy of any award.
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
*
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
*