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Post by bridge on Aug 21, 2012 2:13:44 GMT -5
FAR DOWN
going nowhere
running away from
inner demons
lost among the shadows
seeking salvation inside
frosted bottle
at the edge of murky pier
I find myself standing
thinking it is not
that far down
©Dan
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 21, 2012 2:24:05 GMT -5
WOW, Dan you laid it all down with this one 
excellent job, I hope to see more from you 
many thanks for the great post  
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Post by Bob on Aug 21, 2012 2:38:02 GMT -5
well-crafted and engaging write
;D for sharing
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Post by bridge on Aug 21, 2012 2:51:03 GMT -5
thanks so much Lisa
I am honored to have someone with your immense talent like my poem
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Post by bridge on Aug 21, 2012 2:52:18 GMT -5
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Post by Carin on Aug 21, 2012 2:57:23 GMT -5
a fine example of great writing
thanks for the wonderful read, Dan
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Post by Betty on Aug 21, 2012 3:32:20 GMT -5
a fine poem, Dan 
good to see you posting again
it has been a long time 
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Post by Lee on Aug 21, 2012 4:03:37 GMT -5
excellent poem, Dan
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Post by Brian on Aug 21, 2012 6:08:10 GMT -5
excellent poetry, Dan
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Post by bridge on Aug 21, 2012 6:27:35 GMT -5
thanks so much Lisa, this means much to me coming from you
like you, I write articles for a living and I have not been writing much poetry. I jotted this down at work the other day and wanted to share it with my Echoes Family much love to you Lisa and to you all
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Post by Sara on Aug 21, 2012 11:02:44 GMT -5
a fine poem, Dan
good to see you posting, hope you'll share some more of your poetry
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Post by Treasure on Aug 21, 2012 17:20:28 GMT -5
fantastic job, Dan |
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Post by ken on Aug 21, 2012 19:25:50 GMT -5
sleekly written and to the point, great job |
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Post by Tamika on Aug 22, 2012 1:12:14 GMT -5
fantastic job
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Post by trina on Aug 24, 2012 5:35:50 GMT -5
I love this one Dan great job
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
