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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 1:48:14 GMT -5
SAFE – Lanturne Chain
on
edge of
jagged cliff
I, recklessly,
stand
to
frail rope
I cling as
bitter cold winds
rush
my
footing
slips, I hear
a whispered voice
call
I,
now, know
it’s safe to
finally let
go
©2012 Lisa Arnold
[/b][/color][/size] thanks to Harry and Dan :-[their wonderful poems posted this week inspired me to write this poem  |
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Post by Betty on Aug 22, 2012 1:56:05 GMT -5
>:(Lisa, you always pen a gem and this is exceptional, a fine job 
I am sure Harry and Dan will be so happy that they inspired you write this wonderful poem
thanks for sharing  
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 2:12:38 GMT -5
many thanks, Betty
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Post by Sharon on Aug 22, 2012 2:17:23 GMT -5
Lisa, how do you manage to say so much I so few words?
 pure excellence, my dear friend
I know Dan and Harry will be delighted that they inspired you to pen a wonderful poem such as this 
thanks for sharing
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 2:21:07 GMT -5
Sharon, thank you so much
your praise has brought a big grin to my face, love ya
I sure hope they will like it
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Post by Sharon on Aug 22, 2012 2:25:25 GMT -5
I am sure they will LOVE it as much as me and Betty do
you take us there right on the edge of the that cliff...I can hear and feel the wind swirling...great stuff
you have fantastic day, I am off to bed...catch ya later..I am heading out the :Dof Echoes and going straight to bed
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 2:27:07 GMT -5
awww, that is so sweet of you to say, thanks again
have a great sleep
I am out the :Das well and off to write
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Post by bridge on Aug 22, 2012 2:39:00 GMT -5
Hi Lisa
I was summoned by Princess Sharon to come on over an take a lo at your wonderful poem and without hesitation I am here...
all I can say is WOW...FANTASTIC and WONDERFUL
I cannot believe my poem inspired you to write this engaging and well-crafted lanturne
a fine piece of writing
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Post by ciara on Aug 22, 2012 2:46:53 GMT -5
love it Lisa
it puts the reader on the edge of their set until the end...great job
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Post by Silent-One on Aug 22, 2012 3:10:49 GMT -5
Lisa, I am flattered that my poems inspired you to write this well-crafted lanturne chain... excellent job
keep up the great work
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Post by percy on Aug 22, 2012 3:21:04 GMT -5
great lanturne cahin, Lisa
you have a special way with these that I admire
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 3:26:07 GMT -5
Dan, I am so glad you like this poem, many thanks for all of the kind praise
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 3:30:13 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 3:50:43 GMT -5
Hey Harry, I am so happy that you like my poem
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 22, 2012 3:51:54 GMT -5
many thanks Percy
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pure excellence, my dear friend 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
