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Alicia Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Living Life! Posts: 883	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 18, 2013 2:49:25 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Alicia on Sept 18, 2013 2:49:25 GMT -5 a solid and visual piece, Lisa I enjoyed the read very much I hope all is well with you and have a great day

Charles Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes It's me "blue" Posts: 605	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 18, 2013 22:57:48 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Charles on Sept 18, 2013 22:57:48 GMT -5 a perfect little gem, Lisa! many thanks for the fantastic read

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ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 18, 2013 23:09:53 GMT -5

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Sept 13, 2013 2:48:45 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said:

ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka

late summer sun
abruptly awakes
over jagged river rocks
crisp blue waters
gently flow

ï¿½2013 Lisa Arnold

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fantastic job, Lisa

I hope you get over your cold soon

Last Edit: Sept 19, 2013 5:15:08 GMT -5 by Cyndi

Treasure Echoes Senior Member Friend of Echoes Lorraine Hansberry Posts: 496	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 18, 2013 23:33:32 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Treasure on Sept 18, 2013 23:33:32 GMT -5 one of my favorite short forms, great job! I heard about your cold, get well soon, Lisa:)

Joy Echoes Family Member Posts: 510	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 19, 2013 5:10:44 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Joy on Sept 19, 2013 5:10:44 GMT -5 I am liking this one from you too, Lisa good stuff I am sorry to hear about you being ill...take care
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icee Echoes Family Member Veiled Emotions Friend of Echoes striving and reaching Posts: 661	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 19, 2013 5:12:29 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by icee on Sept 19, 2013 5:12:29 GMT -5 very well-done get well soon
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Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 19, 2013 12:09:15 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Sept 19, 2013 12:09:15 GMT -5 >:(Lisa, I just wanted to say that I hope you get well soon and take care I am still loving your poem

ciara Echoes Family Member Motivated by Passion Friend of Echoes Posts: 821	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 19, 2013 16:54:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by ciara on Sept 19, 2013 16:54:54 GMT -5 a most wonderful gem of a poem, Lisa! thanks for sharing and get well soon:)
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ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 19, 2013 23:01:12 GMT -5

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thank you all so much for the kind reponses about my poem and for the kind get well wishes...I am doing much better, but I still have a bad cold. I hope to be feeling like my old self by the weekend...again thank you and take care

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ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 20, 2013 4:01:59 GMT -5

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Sept 19, 2013 23:01:12 GMT -5 Lisa Arnold said:

thank you all so much for the kind reponses about my poem and for the kind get well wishes...I am doing much better, but I still have a bad cold. I hope to be feeling like my old self by the weekend...again thank you and take care

Hi Lisa

I am so glad to hear that you are feeling a little better

take care and keep us updated

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Kristi Echoes Family Member Friend of Echoes Posts: 677	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 20, 2013 12:20:39 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Kristi on Sept 20, 2013 12:20:39 GMT -5 great poem, Lisa sorry you are not feeling well, I hope you get better soon
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Lisa Arnold Administrator Founder Belief is Power! Within a winter's shadow rests mourning's light"...the human soul cannot be permanently chained." - W.E.B. DuBois Believe in You! Posts: 16,456	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 20, 2013 21:57:30 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 20, 2013 21:57:30 GMT -5 ;D for the kind thoughts about my poem everyone I am feeling better today, but I still have a nasty cough that I cannot shake I hope you all have a great weekend
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Reggie Writing Prompt Moderator[/size] Friend of Echoes Posts: 1,400	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 22, 2013 5:09:16 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Reggie on Sept 22, 2013 5:09:16 GMT -5 Lisa, I am sorry to hear about your cough...have you tried honey, lemon and tea? it works pretty well on coughs

Toni Echoes Family Member Haiku Princess KEEPING PEACE WITHIN Friend of Echoes Seeking and Hoping Posts: 744	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 22, 2013 5:12:58 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Toni on Sept 22, 2013 5:12:58 GMT -5 great poem, Lisa! yes, Reg is right honey and tea works wonders on on coughs as well as cherry cough drops.
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Tamika Echoes Family Member Reggie's wife Posts: 858	ABRUPTLY - a Gogyohka Sept 22, 2013 16:20:54 GMT -5 Quote Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Tamika on Sept 22, 2013 16:20:54 GMT -5 hi Lisa, yes cherry cough drops work for me when I have a cough, try Ricola they work the best to me...take care:)