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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 23, 2014 4:21:38 GMT -5
CLOCK TICKS ON MANTLE – A Tetractys
soul
broken
black on red
solitaire game
clock ticks on mantle, he shuffles the deck
©2014 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Mar 23, 2014 4:28:17 GMT -5
groat job Lisa 
I am not familiar with this form, thanks for introducing it to us at Echoes
have a blessed Sunday  
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 23, 2014 4:54:57 GMT -5
thanks so much Betty!
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Post by Eddie on Mar 23, 2014 5:24:04 GMT -5
I love it Lisa!
I like this form...I have not seen one from you and hope to see more!
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Post by Reggie on Mar 23, 2014 5:54:23 GMT -5
another fine job of writing, dear lady 
I am off to church, so I catch up with you later, love ya
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Post by Tamika on Mar 23, 2014 9:13:45 GMT -5
you stayed true to from and did an excellent job, Lisa!
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Post by Cherrie on Mar 23, 2014 9:24:36 GMT -5
I am with all the rest when I say I LOVE this poem...great job
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Post by Carin on Mar 23, 2014 9:35:42 GMT -5
Lisa, you have managed to say so much in so few words, you are a outstanding poet!
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Post by percy on Mar 23, 2014 11:53:18 GMT -5
wow, a new form I have never heard of!
thanks for posting this fine poem Lisa!
I think I will give this form a try one day soon:)
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Post by Sharon on Mar 23, 2014 16:26:53 GMT -5
brilliant poetry as always kiddo!
have a great Sunday and week!
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Post by bridge on Mar 23, 2014 19:27:43 GMT -5
Lisa, you always post a gem and this one is as wonderful as always...I have never heard of this form neither, good job!
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Post by Alicia on Mar 24, 2014 8:39:32 GMT -5
a gem Lisa, I love it!
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Post by Bob on Mar 24, 2014 17:55:37 GMT -5
wonderful job Lisa!
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Post by Sara on Mar 24, 2014 18:21:28 GMT -5
very nice job Lisa...I am not familiar with this form either...I like it and I hope you'll post more of them!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 24, 2014 23:57:04 GMT -5
thanks everyone for your kind remarks and many thanks for the "likes"!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
