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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 28, 2014 4:17:45 GMT -5
FROM THE CRAWL – A Naani
hands bloodied from the crawl, battered mirror reflection mournful eyes blankly stare
©2014 Lisa Arnold
, this is my first Naani poem...if you want anyone wants know more about this form, check it out here Nanni Poems
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Post by percy on Mar 28, 2014 17:47:53 GMT -5
Hi Lisa, good job
you have nailed this form with your first try
have a wonderful weekend
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Post by Reggie on Mar 28, 2014 17:56:44 GMT -5
well-done, dear lady!
enjoy your weekend!
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Post by mark on Mar 28, 2014 22:24:50 GMT -5
I like this much Lisa, you are blessed with talent!
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Post by Betty on Mar 29, 2014 3:53:18 GMT -5
hey girl, how many styles of poetry do you know how to write so brilliantly?
fantastic job!
I gotta try one of these!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Mar 29, 2014 5:16:26 GMT -5
many thanks Percy, Reg, Mark and Betty...I am enjoying trying some new forms!
thanks for the "likes"
ENJOY your weekend everyone!
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Post by Brian on Mar 30, 2014 0:50:34 GMT -5
a gem Lisa!
I love the way you keep trying new things, good job!
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Post by Sharon on Mar 30, 2014 2:48:39 GMT -5
love it!
have a great Sunday Lisa!
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Post by rico on Mar 30, 2014 4:01:37 GMT -5
I like this Lisa!
good flow, thanks for posting!
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Post by Carin on Mar 30, 2014 4:27:20 GMT -5
I like this style Lisa, you did a great job!
have a blesses Sunday!
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Post by Sara on Mar 30, 2014 8:42:00 GMT -5
good one!
thanks for sharing!
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Post by trina on Mar 30, 2014 17:43:50 GMT -5
a fine job Lisa!
I hope you have a great week!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 1, 2014 3:06:01 GMT -5
thanks so much Brina, Sharon, Rico, Carin, Sara and Trina!
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Post by Bob on Apr 1, 2014 3:56:46 GMT -5
a fine write Lisa!
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Post by Alicia on Apr 1, 2014 4:10:43 GMT -5
great job!
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