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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 8, 2014 2:50:44 GMT -5
SABLE-SILK SKY– A Tetractys
wind
blown leaves
soar across
vacant wheat field
sable-silk sky, train clanks on railroad tracks
©2014 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Betty on Apr 8, 2014 3:53:22 GMT -5
very visually penned Lisa, I love it!
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Post by mark on Apr 8, 2014 3:57:43 GMT -5
WOW, Lisa you are cranking out some fine poetry these past few weeks...excellent job!
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Post by Sara on Apr 8, 2014 4:03:29 GMT -5
solid imagery Lisa...you did a great job!
have a wonderful day and week!
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Post by Reggie on Apr 8, 2014 4:10:47 GMT -5
beautifully done as always dear lady!
enjoy your day kiddo!
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Post by percy on Apr 8, 2014 11:06:10 GMT -5
vivid imagery, very well-done!
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Post by Sharon on Apr 8, 2014 11:33:55 GMT -5
Lisa, I love the title and very well-crafted!
thanks for the post and have a blessed day!
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Post by Bob on Apr 9, 2014 3:37:40 GMT -5
very visually crafted...a great job Lisa!
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Post by Alicia on Apr 9, 2014 23:51:27 GMT -5
Lisa, you certainly have mastered these short forms...outstanding job!
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Post by trina on Apr 10, 2014 3:49:45 GMT -5
wonderfully crafted Lisa!
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Post by icee on Apr 10, 2014 17:32:20 GMT -5
beautifully done, Lisa!
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Post by Brian on Apr 11, 2014 10:36:53 GMT -5
great imagery and very well-crafted!
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 13, 2014 5:01:09 GMT -5
beautiful job Lisa!
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Post by Sierra on May 10, 2014 7:44:02 GMT -5
well-done and very visually scribed...I like it!
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Post by bridge on Jun 1, 2014 6:50:26 GMT -5
wonderful poetry, Lisa!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
