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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 19, 2014 8:58:35 GMT -5
sorry, I had to remove the poem because it is being considered for publication and cannot be online. If it is not selected I will put it back...
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Post by Reggie on Apr 19, 2014 18:41:27 GMT -5
very well-done Lisa, thanks for posting!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 19, 2014 21:47:18 GMT -5
many thanks Reg and Happy Easter to you and your family!
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Post by Sharon on Apr 20, 2014 9:13:57 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa!
HAPPY EASTER to you and your family!
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Post by bridge on Apr 20, 2014 9:33:30 GMT -5
I like the style of this one Lisa!
HAPPY EASTER to you and everyone at Echoes!
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Post by Tamika on Apr 20, 2014 9:47:18 GMT -5
a beautiful and sad poem Lisa...crisp imagery!
HAPPY EASTER to everyone!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 22, 2014 16:51:21 GMT -5
thanks so much Sharon, Dan and Tami, I much appreciate the reads and comments!
I hope you all had a HAPPY EASTER...I have a very bad cold, so I will be absent for the next few days...
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Post by Bob on Apr 23, 2014 4:21:18 GMT -5
well-done Lisa!
I am liking your new poems very much!
thanks for sharing and have a nice day!
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Post by Bob on Apr 23, 2014 4:27:59 GMT -5
Lisa, I forgot tell you that I am so sorry you are sick. I have cold too. Get better soon, love ya!
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Post by Tamika on Apr 24, 2014 10:02:35 GMT -5
sorry to hear you are not feeling well...get well soon Lisa and you too Bob!
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Post by rico on Apr 24, 2014 10:22:43 GMT -5
well expressed Lisa!
it is a shame that many people live their lives in isolation...
thanks for sharing and get well soon!
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 24, 2014 12:23:52 GMT -5
I like this one MUCH Lisa
thanks for posting!
feel better soon, Lisa and Bob
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Post by Joy on Apr 25, 2014 3:56:31 GMT -5
wonderful write Lisa!
your well-crafted poem is very evocative....thanks for sharing and get well soon!
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Post by Betty on Apr 25, 2014 6:43:22 GMT -5
I agree with everyone else...this is a fine poem that well expresses the depth of loneliness...excellent job!
get well soon Lisa! I have the flu, so I know how you feel, love ya!
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Post by ciara on Apr 26, 2014 5:45:28 GMT -5
yes, I like this one too!
great style and sense of "story"
well-done Lisa!
get well soon, girl!
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