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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 6, 2014 3:06:44 GMT -5
HER DESOLATE PLEA - A Gogyohka
voice silenced
soul tied and bond
shattered screams
call from within, no one
hears her desolate plea
©2014 Lisa Arnold
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Post by ciara on May 6, 2014 3:58:15 GMT -5
another excellent poem Lisa, I love your new poetry!
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Post by percy on May 6, 2014 4:13:50 GMT -5
strong write Lisa!
thanks for sharing...
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Post by Betty on May 6, 2014 4:29:11 GMT -5
great poetry Lisa, I love the theme and style of this one, good job!
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Post by rico on May 6, 2014 5:10:08 GMT -5
solid poem, Lisa!
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Post by Cherrie on May 6, 2014 5:15:16 GMT -5
Lisa, you always manage to say so much with so few words...great read   |
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Post by Reggie on May 6, 2014 16:26:56 GMT -5
Lisa, I like the way you built this poem to its conclusion, well-done!
thanks for posting and for the great read!
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Post by trina on May 6, 2014 16:41:07 GMT -5
good title and very well-crafted poem!
I like these short poems from you Lisa, keep them coming!
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Post by Carin on May 6, 2014 17:31:23 GMT -5
a strongly written poem that says much...great job!
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Post by Sharon on May 7, 2014 11:21:12 GMT -5
excellent write Lisa, I am glad to see you back and that you are feeling better!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 7, 2014 12:11:33 GMT -5
thanks so much everyone!
thanks Sharon, I am finally over my cold and I feel fine!
have a great rest of the day everyone!
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Post by Tina on May 9, 2014 11:02:49 GMT -5
well-done Lisa
I am so happy to hear that you are feeling better 
have a great weekend and Happy Mother's Day to your mom
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Post by mark on May 9, 2014 11:21:59 GMT -5
great poem Lisa!
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Post by Dana on May 9, 2014 14:25:37 GMT -5
sad write, but well-told...good job Lisa!
have a great weekend!
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Post by Bob on May 9, 2014 14:40:58 GMT -5
I much like this write from you Lisa, have a great weekend!
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and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
