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Post by MoonMuse on Nov 3, 2016 4:20:40 GMT -5
~BIRD POEM~
I think that I have never heard a poem lovely as a bird who wings through seasons beak to sky and chirps a friendly freedom cry, who perches high in trees to spy all the human passersby. Cheerful as the sun that shines because he knows no caged confines. There are many different kinds just like poems in poet’s minds. He sits upon a telephone wire and nestles in a cathedral spire. This poem here is quite absurd. I pray it’s carried away by a bird.
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Post by purplespirit on Nov 5, 2016 16:40:25 GMT -5
Your poem has been carried away by a dove and it is flying directly into the heart of the reader. Enchanting scenes and perfect rhyme and flow, an admirable poem my friend, thank you for sharing! Bless you, Ursula xx
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Post by Daboetry on Nov 7, 2016 17:23:49 GMT -5
I absolutely adore this! I totally agree with Purplespirit, you've depicted beautiful and enchanting images that makes this a delight to read. Clever comparisons of birds and poems/poets...
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Post by MoonMuse on Dec 3, 2016 5:07:46 GMT -5
Thanks so much Spirit. I had fun writing this one, so I'm glad you enjoyed too.
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Post by MoonMuse on Dec 3, 2016 5:09:26 GMT -5
I'm glad you saw the comparisons Dapoetry. Thank you for me
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