Watch Your Exits

[Auro mani]

Watch Your Exits

Driving through the journey of life
Passing several signs and warnings
I now realize,
My exits have slowed me down

Was it anger?...yes
Was it greed...yes
was it jealousy...yes its true

Pride,ego,lust,depression... & many more
All instant, Inviting & intriguing 
Pulls you into a deep murky world
Before you realize !

When your journey ends,
You will take the right exit
Until then, keep moving forward
Watch all exits, never drive into it

[purplespirit]

A great poem on life's curves and stumbling blocks. Wise conclusion in the last stanza and overall a really good work, it will leave footprints behind, thank you! You'll take the right exit, I trust, for you got wisdom and insight. Ursula xx

[Daboetry]

I totally agree with purplespirit. This is a truly Awesome write and it's a joy to read. I love the message behind this. Great job!