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Post by purplespirit on Apr 23, 2017 15:55:29 GMT -5
As a Brook it starts
The notice of a trickle between ice and rock High up in the mountains where glaciers knock Some moss and pale bluebells on short fragile stems Rare special beauties that shine out like gems.
A bit further downhill the waters took a swell Dancing over pebbles with a sweet murmur as well Like a chamois the brook’s bouncing down the slope To become a river perhaps is the little waters’ hope.
Louder and faster it’s arriving in the valley A river now proud and considering a rally Bank and bed with water-plants soft and green Winding through pasture scenes with water so clean.
With waters increasing it’s aiming towards sea From the beginning they have been so free Not all life meanders like this green river’s charm May the song of the river never stop by harm.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 31, 2017 14:07:47 GMT -5
great imagery...solid write, thanks for the great read!
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Post by Tamika on Sept 8, 2017 23:39:54 GMT -5
very well written!
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Post by purplespirit on Sept 19, 2017 15:54:28 GMT -5
Your lovely comments are encouraging, thanks to you both! Bless you, Ursula xx
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