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Post by elizabethvitale on Sept 8, 2017 21:10:37 GMT -5
Only One Light
On a broken old chair In a dirty old room With only one light Only one light To see my way Only one light To shine on me Only one light I can't understand I can't hear why Only one light On a broken old chair In a dirty old room With only one light
Elizabeth Vitale
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 8, 2017 21:37:53 GMT -5
love the title, great style...
enjoyed the read, cant wait to read more from you
many thanks for posting and Welcome to Echoes!
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Post by Tamika on Sept 8, 2017 23:35:12 GMT -5
enjoyed the read, thanks for sharing
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Post by purplespirit on Sept 19, 2017 15:53:40 GMT -5
Liked the style and message of your lovely poem, it stirs thoughts, thank you and nice to meet "a new face" here. Ursula xx
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Post by Sharon on Sept 19, 2017 22:38:26 GMT -5
great job, enjoyed the read and for posting
smileys-smiley-with-sign-580722 to the site
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Post by Daboetry on Sept 30, 2017 10:06:55 GMT -5
I concur with everyone else, very cool style and awesome message!
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