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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 29, 2017 22:28:34 GMT -5
Hi all, I am not sure if I posted this one here before 
OHIO RIVER - tanka
day fades rapidly
as approaching night falls on
Ohio river
vast shadows cascade over
shimmering rippling waters
©2005 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Lee on Sept 29, 2017 22:56:24 GMT -5
I don't remember seeing it Lisa
strong imagery and very well done 
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Post by Eddie on Sept 29, 2017 23:33:46 GMT -5
I think I remember this one, but it's good to read it again...great tanka!
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Post by Betty on Sept 30, 2017 7:55:20 GMT -5
fantastic tanka poem Lisa 
I do believe it has been posted here many years ago 
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Post by Tina on Sept 30, 2017 8:20:00 GMT -5
love this one, good job!
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Post by Sharon on Sept 30, 2017 11:25:38 GMT -5
well done!
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Post by Bob on Sept 30, 2017 23:42:03 GMT -5
yep, baby girl, it has been posted here before about 10 years ago...but it's all good
loved it then and love it more today 
thanks for posting 
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Post by Tamika on Oct 1, 2017 1:24:07 GMT -5
a fine tanka smileys-smiley-with-sign-427398
 for the post
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Post by Alicia on Oct 1, 2017 15:34:33 GMT -5
good job, Lisa
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Post by Rose on Oct 2, 2017 21:51:43 GMT -5
a fine poem, love it!!
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Post by rico on Oct 3, 2017 13:03:41 GMT -5
a spot-on tanka, a great write and read!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 4, 2017 7:31:47 GMT -5
everyone
I really appreciate the kind words
yes, I do remember posting this one her at Echoes way back in 2005, wow
take care all 
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Post by ciara on Oct 6, 2017 18:53:04 GMT -5
it's new to new Lisa, great write smileys-smiley-with-sign-427398
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 10, 2017 1:24:58 GMT -5
many thanks Ci
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Post by Joy on Oct 19, 2017 16:40:53 GMT -5
love it!
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for the post 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
