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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 1, 2018 13:53:29 GMT -5
Vacant Winds
lone
shadow
crawls; vacant
winds awaken
dawn
©2018 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Joan on Aug 1, 2018 14:31:43 GMT -5
 great job 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 1, 2018 14:43:40 GMT -5
 so much Joan 
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Post by Sierra on Aug 1, 2018 15:30:56 GMT -5
very visually penned, great job 
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Post by Lola on Aug 1, 2018 19:31:33 GMT -5
like the flow of this one 
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Post by Jay on Aug 1, 2018 19:42:44 GMT -5
wonderfully depicted 
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Post by Reggie on Aug 1, 2018 20:09:14 GMT -5
a vivid and engaging poem that is true to form
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Post by Betty on Aug 1, 2018 20:29:56 GMT -5
well-crafted piece
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Post by Alicia on Aug 1, 2018 21:05:38 GMT -5
very well done
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Post by Tamika on Aug 1, 2018 21:24:33 GMT -5
excellent poem
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Post by Bob on Aug 1, 2018 21:34:57 GMT -5
Lisa, I do marvel at how you manage to tell a complete story with so few words
for the post
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Post by bridge on Aug 1, 2018 23:04:35 GMT -5
a most visual write
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Post by Kristi on Aug 2, 2018 6:35:37 GMT -5
well-done
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 2, 2018 7:29:55 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 2, 2018 7:30:34 GMT -5
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great job 
so much Joan 
Sierra 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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Hello everyone, sorry I have been away from the site so long but I was swamped with work 
Aug 5, 2021 14:19:11 GMT -5
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