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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 21, 2018 4:08:45 GMT -5
New Day's Sun
dawn collides
with new day’s sun
rose petal breeze
ripples across
ocean’s breadth
touch of his caress
awakens desires within
©2018 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Percy1 on Sept 21, 2018 4:21:40 GMT -5
love it, Lisa 
hey, u got a typo in line 6 think you meant "of "
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Sept 21, 2018 4:24:00 GMT -5
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Post by Sierra on Sept 21, 2018 5:12:27 GMT -5
well-done 
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Post by Reggie on Sept 21, 2018 9:22:20 GMT -5
great write
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Post by Sara on Sept 21, 2018 9:26:23 GMT -5
 title and nicely written and expressed
Lisa, i enjoyed the read and  for posting 
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Post by Betty on Sept 21, 2018 9:32:20 GMT -5
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Post by Tamika on Sept 21, 2018 9:45:17 GMT -5
love this piece from you Lisa
reminds me of my hubby Reg 
 for the great read and post
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Post by Brianna on Sept 21, 2018 10:23:36 GMT -5
excellent write 
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Post by Alicia on Sept 21, 2018 10:43:34 GMT -5
a fine write Lisa 
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Post by Joy on Sept 21, 2018 10:54:46 GMT -5
strong write and solid imagery 
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Post by Cherrie on Sept 21, 2018 12:54:39 GMT -5
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Post by bridge on Sept 21, 2018 13:49:44 GMT -5
a fine write from your pen Lisa 
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Post by Tina on Sept 22, 2018 3:20:48 GMT -5
wonderfully crafted
i really like your short form poetry
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Post by Silent-One on Sept 22, 2018 4:02:17 GMT -5
you've penned another gem my dear friend
for the post and great 
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Percy for the kind comment and typo alert 
title and nicely written and expressed 
for posting 
this poem 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 