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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 15, 2021 23:26:35 GMT -5
here spit don’t fly in the wind and there ain’t no cape wearing hero or heroine going to swoop down and save the day
here death precedes life. Yes, the sentence is swift and brutal. No, it does not offer mercy or forget or forgive.
here piled deep ashes hold secrets only the brave dare to explore; look among the ruins for lives remnants and just maybe one or two stories will be disclosed
here the price for escaping is always paid. Lives perish in this wretched place as engulfed dreams lie buried beneath weight of existence
here death lingers in the cracks, corners and walls a pungent stench is nestled inside the halls where the cockroaches and rats roam
here fear is real and relentless and, yes, it knows and collects every name. Many ask, but, I am sorry to reveal a reprieve is almost never granted
©2021 Lisa Arnold
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Jun 15, 2021 23:57:39 GMT -5
Post by trina on Jun 15, 2021 23:57:39 GMT -5
Lisa, your well-crafted poem perfectly captures blight and hopelessness that many suffer
thanks for sharing
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Jun 16, 2021 0:18:33 GMT -5
Post by Bob on Jun 16, 2021 0:18:33 GMT -5
poignant and blunt write that you have perfectly penned
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Jun 16, 2021 0:34:48 GMT -5
Post by rico on Jun 16, 2021 0:34:48 GMT -5
a sad but important write that tells it like it is...I enjoyed the read
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Jun 16, 2021 0:48:55 GMT -5
Post by Betty on Jun 16, 2021 0:48:55 GMT -5
Lisa, I must say this engaging write is moving and stirs the emotions
for posting it here
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Post by Reggie on Jun 16, 2021 1:13:50 GMT -5
Dear Lisa, your well-expressed poem really made me stop and think and it explores urban blight and human suffering perfectly
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Post by mark on Jun 16, 2021 1:29:13 GMT -5
this poem made me feel sad but I totally get the importance of your theme and found it to be poignantly written
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 16, 2021 1:59:59 GMT -5
so much for the reads and comments Trina, Bob, Rico, Betty, Reg and Mark
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Jun 16, 2021 4:40:54 GMT -5
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Post by Sierra on Jun 16, 2021 4:40:54 GMT -5
Your poem speaks volumes and is well presented, thanks for the great read🙂👍
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Jun 16, 2021 9:16:47 GMT -5
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Post by Charles on Jun 16, 2021 9:16:47 GMT -5
solid write and timeless theme, well executed poem ⭐⭐⭐
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Jun 16, 2021 15:07:39 GMT -5
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Post by icee on Jun 16, 2021 15:07:39 GMT -5
Your poem flows well and has a strong voice, great job🌟
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Jun 16, 2021 21:08:55 GMT -5
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Post by Lee on Jun 16, 2021 21:08:55 GMT -5
Lisa I like the style and theme of this woke write⭐👍🙂
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Jun 17, 2021 17:29:49 GMT -5
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Post by Joan on Jun 17, 2021 17:29:49 GMT -5
Solid and bold poem⭐⭐⭐
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Post by Treasure on Jun 19, 2021 9:31:39 GMT -5
Meaningful and true write, great job⭐🌟👍
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Post by Silent-One on Jun 19, 2021 21:06:47 GMT -5
Lisa, your poem is powerfully penned! Thanks for sharing🙂
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