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Post by Cherrie on Jan 11, 2005 17:50:59 GMT -5
splashing in summer rain puddles hoping to cleanse my guilt
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 11, 2005 19:22:16 GMT -5
very well written Cherrie Great job
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Post by Brian on Jan 11, 2005 23:18:13 GMT -5
well written haiku Just curious the last word did you really mean "quilt" or did you mean "guilt?"
I mix my "g's" and "q's"up all the time and was just wondering;D
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Post by Sharon on Jan 12, 2005 0:12:36 GMT -5
wonderful write Thanks for sharing your work with us
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Post by Dana on Jan 12, 2005 0:29:54 GMT -5
nice write Brian nice observation I bet she meant guilt, I do that alot too
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Post by Cherrie on Jan 12, 2005 3:31:08 GMT -5
Brian, thanks for pointing that out
Yeah Dana, I did mean "guilt" I changed it ;D
Thanks for your nice comments as well
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Post by Bob on Jan 12, 2005 6:32:13 GMT -5
nice write! Hey quilt may have worked as well
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Post by Toni on Jan 13, 2005 19:54:55 GMT -5
great write Cherrie
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 13, 2005 23:02:31 GMT -5
Nice thing about "guilt" and "quilt."
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Post by Cherrie on Jan 17, 2005 5:32:21 GMT -5
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Post by Bob on Jan 17, 2005 21:39:52 GMT -5
congrats
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 23, 2005 22:19:23 GMT -5
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