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haiku
Jan 19, 2005 6:52:18 GMT -5
Post by Bob on Jan 19, 2005 6:52:18 GMT -5
howling March winds muffle agonizing moans pleading for you to save me
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haiku
Jan 19, 2005 7:05:33 GMT -5
Post by Brianna on Jan 19, 2005 7:05:33 GMT -5
nice write
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haiku
Jan 19, 2005 18:08:26 GMT -5
Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 19, 2005 18:08:26 GMT -5
:DReally nice!
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haiku
Jan 19, 2005 18:37:40 GMT -5
Post by Cherrie on Jan 19, 2005 18:37:40 GMT -5
I like this one Bob but the last line troubles me a bit.
shouldn't it read:
"as I plead for you to save me"
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haiku
Jan 19, 2005 19:35:34 GMT -5
Post by Jay on Jan 19, 2005 19:35:34 GMT -5
very well done I agree with Cherrie about the last line
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