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Post by Cherrie on Jan 28, 2005 4:23:39 GMT -5
gentle morning rains quench blossoming rose's thirst
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Post by Brian on Jan 28, 2005 6:56:44 GMT -5
nice job just as a suggestion: wouldn't it read better this way? "gentle morning rain quenches blossoming roses thirst"
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 28, 2005 9:45:35 GMT -5
Well I'm not sure which way she means...
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Post by MoonMuse on Feb 2, 2005 8:01:29 GMT -5
Very beautiful and I do like Brian's suggestion.
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