(BRONZE STAR AWARD) March 28/April 3-2005

[Cherrie]

mother's love for her
child is as beautiful as
a blossoming rose

[icee]

I like this one, Cherrie

but I think it would read better if it went something like this:

"mother's love
for child; beautiful
as blossoming rose"


*just my thinking though ;D

[Cherrie]

thanks for the award

and thanks for the comments, icee