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Post by Tina on Dec 11, 2004 20:52:51 GMT -5
Lisa, Tony read your story and he 
He wanted me to tell you that you are a wonderful writer, and he wiashes you the BEST with gettign this story published 
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 12, 2004 15:02:11 GMT -5
Aww  Tina Tell Tony I appreciate his kindness and give him a BIG for me 
so much for commenting ;D
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Post by Brianna on Dec 14, 2004 18:14:12 GMT -5
Lisa,
I read your story and I absolutely loved it! It has a great sense of emotion and it is very well-crafted 
You did a great job on this one ;D
for sharing and I wish you luck in publishing it
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Dec 15, 2004 5:31:54 GMT -5
Bri I am keeping my fingers crossed that it gets published this time ;D
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 16, 2004 9:51:02 GMT -5
;)Hello Lisa, Just thought that maybe you want to emphasize a little bit more on the impending storm, so the situation will seem more ominous. Isn't the storm thing a forshadowing? |
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Post by Seashellstarz on Dec 16, 2004 9:54:33 GMT -5
I reread your story for the fourth time. Um, never mind my last comment. |
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Post by Sheila63 on Jan 8, 2005 20:35:37 GMT -5
I loved the story, Lisa!! You did a wonderful job. It definitely kept me interested and I thought it was very descriptive. I felt like I was seeing the story as I was  it, if that makes sense.  I hope it gets published. ;D |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 9, 2005 20:53:55 GMT -5
Thanks everyone I deeply appreciate the feedback
Yeah, Sheila that makes perfect sense. I always try to envision the writer's intentions whenever I read
Well everyone, I just got a rejection notice the other day  But it was very encouraging and they asked me to submit more work to them I will be sending "Suddenly"out to another market in the next few days 
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Post by Seashellstarz on Jan 9, 2005 22:18:14 GMT -5
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Post by Cherrie on Jan 10, 2005 19:46:26 GMT -5
GREAT story Lisa I am sorry it didn't get published But I am glad you are sending it out again It is bound to get picked up soon ;D
Thanks for sharing your work
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 12, 2005 17:16:06 GMT -5
Thanks Shellz and Cherrie |
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Post by Sheila63 on Jan 16, 2005 7:07:06 GMT -5
Sorry to hear about the notice, Lisa. It's a great story and I'm happy to hear you submitted it to another market. |
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 26, 2005 12:22:34 GMT -5
Thanks so much Sheila
I won't know if they are going to publish it for another few months. I'll be sure to let you all know if it gets published this time
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Tina 
it, if that makes sense. 
But it was very encouraging and they asked me to submit more work to them 
and 
all
time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
