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Post by Zeb on Jan 22, 2006 14:20:50 GMT -5
Off The Rails I remember the first time we met. She was stunning. Her long blue coat was so unusal. I had gotten so used to white ones. I found her to be quite a breath of fresh air, in my monotonous little life.
From the get go she was so attentive and understanding. Not a word I spoke went unheeded. She would even take notes, from time to time. This is something I found odd but it sort of grew on me after a while.
As time went on though, I found us growing apart. I rarely saw her and when I did she was becoming secretive. She tried to drug me, so she could sneak off and be with her friends in the white coats. This frightend, confused and aggrevated me. She was playing with my mind on purpose. I was sure of it. Now she is saying, my jealousy has made her afraid of me.
Obviously, she has become dellusional. SHE has imprisoned me in my room. SHE has had a straight jacket put on me, by her two big friends because I tried to strangle her. Only out of love ofcourse. All of her friends keep trying to convince me that she's my doctor and that I have to stop talking to you, wall, my one and only true comfort. I know the truth though, my friend and that is, that I'm fine and my so called "doctor", is the the one that's off the rails...Warren Zeblon Gill
Copyright ©2005 Warren Zeblon Gill |
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Post by Tina on Jan 24, 2006 3:28:11 GMT -5
good narration in this story, enjoyed the read, thanks for posting:)
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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 19, 2006 15:24:39 GMT -5
Ha! Great, great stuff man. Oh yeah. I really liked... nicely done  Excellent! Magnifique! Ar Fheabhas (means excellent) Go h-iontach (wonderful) -Sarah. |
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Post by Zeb on Mar 19, 2006 15:39:50 GMT -5
Go raibh mhaith agat..agus Taim ina gconai sa baile atha cliath dthigim na focaleanna a deireann tu..Taim abalta ag caint as Gailge, Bearla, Francais agus cupla eile..Bhuel..enough showing off..thankz n I didn't know you were Irish..he he
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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 19, 2006 15:44:40 GMT -5
Oh hey yeah, look it says u from Eire in your profile! Kewl! Well so, Happy Lá Fheile Pádraig then. A bit late but what the hey French is 'Francis' as Gaeilge Showoff. -Sarah |
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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 19, 2006 15:45:38 GMT -5
It's just 'na focail'.
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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 19, 2006 15:47:01 GMT -5
And it's just 'tuigim'. Advantages of doin higher level Irish for the Airdteist |
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Post by Zeb on Mar 19, 2006 15:50:23 GMT -5
snow biggy izit..it can be either..I haven't written or spoken Irish in agez.. ~__^ at first I hD FOCAIL..And THUIGIM but who carez
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Post by aquarianstar on Mar 19, 2006 15:52:47 GMT -5
lol.. I won't contradict any more cos I like u. Hey, you're Irish, how can I not!?
(shameless patriotism, I know, I know)
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Post by teardroprain on Mar 29, 2006 0:28:56 GMT -5
I absolutly love this peice..it really caught my intrest and I really like the way it's writen. Great story peice |
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Post by janicemarie on Apr 15, 2006 12:26:15 GMT -5
Very well written,. I enjoyed  it very much. |
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it very much. 
and 
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time for me 
echoes, hope you all are doing well 
