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Post by tcn on Jul 10, 2007 22:27:29 GMT -5
Summer in Calcutta
It never feels like summer in Calcutta despite the sweltering heat. The house is bleak, and by the gardens, mounds, stones and trees a serene yellow-green glassiness chills the speech of the lovebirds.
My mother-in-law is in the kitchen boiling tea the Indian way, bringing the water to a boil, separating it from the stove before pouring it into a Bone China decanter. I see her add the exotic tea leaves and spices with care before covering it with a "tea cozy" letting it sit for three minutes, slowly brewing. She gives me a playful and reluctant look of anticipation. Once ready, she filters it into fine, delicate cups adding milk and sweetener to taste.
She takes a sip sampling the brew and smiles before offering me a spoonful. It has a unique flavor, one brought about by the variation of culture, language and customs. We both bow our heads in agreement but no words are exchanged. There is a calm in the house, on the land, not to be mistaken for peace, just a deadening quiet.
In the next room an illustration by Edmund Dulac hangs on the white wall and I dream about Queen Scheherazade telling her stories to King Shahryar. I want the same enthusiasm of an artist over the mere order of a solitary home impatient over her lover's absence.
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Post by storytime on Jul 11, 2007 10:41:17 GMT -5
"and suddenly the door flew open and the cookie monster charged in growling"
Your prose is fine, but we don't know nuttin about nobody! Also "for 3-5 minutes"? come on, you were there, was it three or was it five?
Once again, your prose is great, but now I vant CONTENT! Ve haf vays of making you gif content!
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Post by lanaia74 on Jul 19, 2007 4:46:33 GMT -5
You are very very talented? Ever been published? Well if not you should be! Superb!
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