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Post by moontear on Apr 11, 2010 4:42:43 GMT -5
BAT MOON ~ TRIPLE PENSEE
Bat moon haunting the mist, dripping with blood of the damned, north of the crab constellation, a jewel of midnight sky.
Blood moon Dripping with night, Animated with bat wings, Distant hung in a starless sky Flies away with the dark.
Bad moon on the blood rise, steals the pitch black from the night, filling the chalice of souls with red of resurrection.
© Karen Davies
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 11, 2010 5:33:56 GMT -5
Karen, this is great writing!
I do not think I aahve ever heard of a Pensee before, thanks for sharing!
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Post by Lola on Apr 11, 2010 5:50:31 GMT -5
I don't know this form either, looked it up and this is a great example of this form of poetry!
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Post by sunny on Apr 11, 2010 7:52:30 GMT -5
very interesting.... the image goes very well with the poem!
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Post by Sharon on Apr 11, 2010 22:44:58 GMT -5
well writen, great form!
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Post by Betty on Apr 12, 2010 6:06:37 GMT -5
excellent!
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Post by sunny on Apr 12, 2010 6:33:30 GMT -5
very good talent of you!
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Post by Bob on Apr 12, 2010 9:44:43 GMT -5
I love this, very original and rare, good form!
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Post by Jack on Apr 13, 2010 5:03:43 GMT -5
love it!!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 15, 2010 23:06:50 GMT -5
Congratulations Karen!
The Echoes Staff has awarded your poem "Bat Moon" SHORT FORM POEM OF THE WEEK!!
You have written a most excellent poem and we thank you for sharing it with us at Echoes!
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Post by mark on Apr 15, 2010 23:50:59 GMT -5
love it!!
my congrats to you Karen!
excellent choice.
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 16, 2010 0:22:37 GMT -5
what a great write...my congratulations to you Karen!
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Post by Joan on Apr 16, 2010 3:44:37 GMT -5
good decision, this is a wicked and well-written write!
my congrats to a fine poet!
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Post by Betty on Apr 16, 2010 4:51:53 GMT -5
CONGRATS [/size][/b]
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Post by sunny on Apr 16, 2010 6:09:05 GMT -5
Congratulation to you! for your such great talent!
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