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Post by b4sunset on May 21, 2010 3:56:46 GMT -5
on a combed pillow pale rose of lips lick disheveled ferns glowing
in rustles of arms. beg i must, veil of your scent touch soft upon my waiting weeds. nenette Short Form Poem of The Week
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Post by Lisa Arnold on May 21, 2010 4:02:18 GMT -5
wonderful write!
very visually scribed!
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Post by Betty on May 21, 2010 6:38:12 GMT -5
wonderfully done Nenette!
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Post by Alicia on May 21, 2010 7:48:55 GMT -5
bravo!!
magnificent write!
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Post by Dana on May 21, 2010 8:43:59 GMT -5
oh Nenette I wish I could stay here and bask in the glory of this write, but I gotta get back to work...great job!
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Post by Rose on May 21, 2010 9:22:55 GMT -5
how do you write like this excellent senyru ;D
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Post by Joan on May 21, 2010 12:00:31 GMT -5
I echo what everyone else has said, great write!
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Post by b4sunset on May 22, 2010 16:11:18 GMT -5
Lisa, i don't know what came over me.. lol,, thanks for appreciating this!
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Post by johan on May 22, 2010 23:25:22 GMT -5
Great write Nenette as always.
Johan
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Post by Bob on May 28, 2010 5:52:40 GMT -5
Congratulations Nenette!
The Echoes Staff has awarded your modern senyru "Tenderly Dark" SHORT FORM POEM OF THE WEEK!!
You have written a fantastic poem, and we thank you for sharing it with us at Echoes!
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Post by Reggie on May 28, 2010 6:25:41 GMT -5
CONGRATS dear Nenette...great poem!![/size][/b]
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Post by Kristi on May 28, 2010 7:24:25 GMT -5
congrats Nenette!
great write
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Post by Betty on May 28, 2010 8:22:01 GMT -5
;D CONGRATS Nenette!! [/color] wonderfully done
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Post by Sierra on May 28, 2010 9:05:23 GMT -5
congrats, nice write!
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Post by b4sunset on May 28, 2010 9:37:43 GMT -5
Hello, betty... am loving what you said here.. thanks!
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