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Post by b4sunset on Jun 3, 2010 4:32:49 GMT -5
away from all that disturbs our holy quests i ransack the ligaments of my soul. and there i find hurt street children wanting the sunglow's promise that all babes living within us and out of garbage bags be taken in nests free from sin, free from world's viruses--- make them clean as they arrived in umbilical light in forms innocent, translucent like the first sanctruary of dew. of what season can it be where we can inhale their lilith light, swallow the innocent grains of dusk and still carve one, one permanent stone that will cradle their laps with cottons of laughter and bowls of ermine dreams.nenette Short Form Poem of The Week
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jun 3, 2010 13:51:40 GMT -5
wow, this is great writing...you knocked this one out of the park!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 4, 2010 15:20:19 GMT -5
Thanks, lisa.. i feel like a winner with your comment!! :0
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Post by Rose on Jun 7, 2010 7:19:57 GMT -5
wow, I echo what Lisa said, this is a fantastic write!
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Post by rico on Jun 8, 2010 7:04:27 GMT -5
excellent write!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 9, 2010 15:46:44 GMT -5
Much appreciated, rico!
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Post by b4sunset on Jun 9, 2010 15:47:24 GMT -5
Rose, you delight me.. thanks!
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Post by johan on Jun 9, 2010 17:58:41 GMT -5
Nenette, this is just a wonderful read.
Andrew
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Post by rico on Jun 11, 2010 3:17:23 GMT -5
congrats dear Nenette...great poem!
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Post by Sierra on Jun 11, 2010 3:26:29 GMT -5
this is such a wonderfully written poem! I was hopng it would get SFPOTW, great job and congrats!
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Post by Reggie on Jun 11, 2010 3:55:46 GMT -5
love it, congrats!
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Post by Joan on Jun 11, 2010 4:11:05 GMT -5
congrats!
great wite!
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Post by Toni on Jun 11, 2010 4:39:38 GMT -5
congrats to you!
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Post by trina on Jun 11, 2010 5:18:06 GMT -5
my deepest congrats to you!
great poem
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Post by Tamika on Jun 11, 2010 5:34:09 GMT -5
poignant write, great job and congrats!
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