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Post by davelyoung1 on Jul 11, 2010 12:08:22 GMT -5
Mountain Meadow Aura
Winding trail mist that intertwines among aspen and pines Awakening clearing bares mountain meadow vista singularity, Where wildflower buds blossom inside visual sensory confines, Wherein mental waves traverse cerebral flight conscience clarity.
Biometric heartbeat synchronization weathering page of time Darting hummingbird senses radiate pollinated aromatic fragrances. Levitating butterfly currents furrow harmonic resonance rhyme, Breezing mellow moods of dynamic flow spectrums absorbance.
Spread the writer’s wings dancing alight baring alliterated auras Rippling quill sensation fluttering sway of tranquil visual scenery, Radiating inside inner illumination of sensory perceptions flora Germinating perceptual awareness of surrounding vivid greenery.
Telescoping mind sharing microscopic details baring word’s incision To penetrate the sword point blade inside word’s worth of elocution, Where the ground vibrates inside humanity’s soul core with precision Quaking alive within the beauty of Mother Nature earth contributions.
One lays among natural melodies absorbing sensual swaying peace, Wherein one levitates within the eagle’s spirit of inspirational sight Soaring high within the miracle of birthright’s inner potential pieces, Absorbing cohesion between heaven and earth transfusion’s pure insight.
David Lester Young 07/10/10
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Post by johan on Jul 12, 2010 2:30:04 GMT -5
I think thiis is one of your best Dave, such cohesion with each stanza, an absorbing poem of nature.
Johan
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Post by b4sunset on Jul 12, 2010 3:17:35 GMT -5
Bringing your creative gift to a higher level, amazing dave!
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Post by Sharon on Jul 12, 2010 7:19:30 GMT -5
a very well-crafted write!
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Post by davelyoung1 on Jul 12, 2010 8:02:44 GMT -5
Thank You Johan it was a little different style.
Thank You b4sunset one must keep trying to elevate but there is a long way to go.
Thank You Sharon, blessings to you.
I keep trying things and keep adapting in what I love to do, in writing my Uni-Verse. It is the poets here that keep me refining from my frustration and at times I may seem distant, but I do appreciate everyone here.
Blessings to you!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jul 12, 2010 9:44:52 GMT -5
such wonderful poetry!
enjoyed the read!
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Post by davelyoung1 on Jul 12, 2010 10:38:58 GMT -5
Thank You Lisa for your inspiring words.
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Post by rainbowrider on Jul 12, 2010 19:22:10 GMT -5
Aura indeed, in word and images,
RR
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Post by heart2heart on Jul 13, 2010 7:55:19 GMT -5
I must agree with Johan, this is marvellous Dave and a true pleasure to read. Heart2Heart
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Post by davelyoung1 on Jul 13, 2010 11:07:37 GMT -5
Thank You rainbowrider and heart2heart, Blessings to both of you and the rest of the poets here.
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Post by bridge on Jul 16, 2010 3:13:19 GMT -5
excellent writing!
congrats to you!
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Post by Reggie on Jul 16, 2010 5:32:31 GMT -5
CONGRATS a very well-written poem
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Post by Betty on Jul 16, 2010 6:01:00 GMT -5
CONGRATS a very well-composed write
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Post by sunny on Jul 16, 2010 23:05:13 GMT -5
Very enjoy it Dave! your words and imaginations are so rich and exceptional! master work! Congrats to you!
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Post by Toni on Jul 17, 2010 0:59:06 GMT -5
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