suzieq
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Post by suzieq on Aug 10, 2010 9:52:53 GMT -5
Beside the seashore one summer night, a flock of birds are taking flight. Frightened by a nocturnal creature, creating for you a beautiful picture.
The distant moon, the starry sky, the moving sea; the firefly. All of nature's beauty shines, across the ocean a perfect design.
Seeing this painted across the sky, a beauty that we cannot deny. Makes our life's troubles seem, trivial and less extreme.
Sitting there you reminisce about love's very first kiss. Then you feel that all is right, beside the seashore one summer night. © 7/25/2010 M S Wyatt. All Rights Reserved.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 10, 2010 12:56:32 GMT -5
back to Echoes
a beautifully penned write
hope to read more from you
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Post by johan on Aug 10, 2010 13:52:54 GMT -5
A absolutely stunning picture and portrayal with this fantastic piece of poetry, great job.
Johan
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Post by Rush on Aug 10, 2010 16:15:56 GMT -5
An uptempo and uplifting poem, this one flows with the rhythm of the tide and captures much of the beauty of one moment in time to be treasured forever. A summer night at the beach has never seemed so soothing, the blend of the celestial and seaside imagery works well together and I love how the final stanza showed the romantic inspiration such a calming location can inspire.
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Post by backstreetdreamer on Aug 11, 2010 8:06:39 GMT -5
really lovely images Suzie...Keith.
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Aug 11, 2010 8:13:03 GMT -5
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Post by purplespirit on Aug 11, 2010 8:48:01 GMT -5
A very beautiful description of the wonders of nature which are all around us IF we only open our heart to see. Thank you and congrats on POTD! Ulla xx
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Post by Brian on Aug 11, 2010 8:53:56 GMT -5
great poem..congrats to you for POTD!
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suzieq
Echoes Junior Member
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Post by suzieq on Aug 11, 2010 9:23:25 GMT -5
Oh WOW! What a wonderful Birthday Present! POTD Award! Thank you so very much for this honor.
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Post by shadowangel on Aug 11, 2010 13:42:25 GMT -5
~ Happy Birthday, Suzie Congratulations on a much deserved POTD Award This is a delightfully enchantiing piece of poetry that brightens my cold winter morning....love it! *hugs* Sasha xx
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Post by Joan on Aug 11, 2010 16:25:11 GMT -5
wonderful poem
HAPPY BIRTHDAY
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Post by b4sunset on Aug 11, 2010 20:55:22 GMT -5
to recieve an award on your birthday is sheer delight, sq!! what a delightful gift that shows your sense of gentle impressions.. have a ball and DOUBLE GREETINGS to you!!
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Post by heart2heart on Aug 12, 2010 1:33:27 GMT -5
Now this is a poem I completely fall for, it is absolutely delightful in sentiments, words and rhymes, simply beguiling poesy. And congrats with the award sweet Suzie, such a worthy winner. Heart2Heart
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Post by michaelgallatin on Aug 12, 2010 22:07:51 GMT -5
Pretty picture, pretty poem, pretty sentiments! Um, did I say how pretty this is? Well deserving of a POTD! Also, Happy Birthday and hope you had a nice, big ! Mike
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suzieq
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Post by suzieq on Aug 13, 2010 13:32:28 GMT -5
[/color][/size] [/quote] A very beautiful description of the wonders of nature which are all around us IF we only open our heart to see. Thank you and congrats on POTD! Ulla xx ~ Happy Birthday, Suzie Congratulations on a much deserved POTD Award This is a delightfully enchantiing piece of poetry that brightens my cold winter morning....love it! *hugs* Sasha xx
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