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Post by b4sunset on Oct 7, 2010 15:13:06 GMT -5
of late, in sedate soft signs when the hearth of coal seeks that which exposes a content heart, i slip into a gauze of familiar honesty, accepting the slow exposure of a day, fingers warming the pleasant peasant smiles. the flapping ears of the wind are fair as roses inching into a rare aisle of contentment dissolving the grates of anxious tears, it is as simple as that. gratitude is known as a prize for drinking the bliss of simple pleasure bestowed by dew reflecting new. nenette
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Post by michaelgallatin on Oct 7, 2010 16:59:24 GMT -5
Simply stated but extremely pretty.
Mike
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Post by Sara on Oct 7, 2010 22:22:31 GMT -5
nice job!
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Post by Betty on Oct 8, 2010 3:49:29 GMT -5
beautiful poem!
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Post by b4sunset on Oct 11, 2010 14:23:58 GMT -5
Thanks for appreciating this, mike..
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Post by johan on Oct 11, 2010 17:52:56 GMT -5
Absolutely wonderful writing Nenette.
Andrew
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Post by Charles on Oct 12, 2010 6:18:54 GMT -5
fantastic writing!
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Post by b4sunset on Oct 14, 2010 10:09:50 GMT -5
Sara, special thanks!!
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Post by b4sunset on Oct 14, 2010 10:10:23 GMT -5
Betty, you fill me up! ;D
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Post by b4sunset on Oct 14, 2010 10:11:14 GMT -5
Andrew, go for short poems.. you're great!
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Post by b4sunset on Oct 14, 2010 10:12:08 GMT -5
Blue, of late, i'm liking your visits on my threads... thanks!!
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Post by Reggie on Oct 15, 2010 4:26:30 GMT -5
beautifully written, CONGRATS on the award!
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Post by Eddie on Oct 15, 2010 8:56:02 GMT -5
CONGRATS to you for your award...excellent poetry!
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Post by trina on Oct 15, 2010 9:35:01 GMT -5
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Post by Alicia on Oct 15, 2010 14:51:38 GMT -5
very nice, my CONGRATS!
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