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Post by backstreetdreamer on Oct 21, 2010 11:39:24 GMT -5
Sometimes a dawn is eager to commence the coming time it tends to trip over the morning as it composes it’s rhyme, althought it’s merely over eagerness, it keeps the sun at bay another pause upon it’s climb, another hesitating day, where echoes hav’nt came back, where reflections hav’nt shown just an empty pitter patter sky of clouds drifting alone, with their faces drooped in shadow, yet behind them dipped in gold for the sun has started painting, as the dawn shakes off it’s cold.
Sometimes the sea gives up it’s whispers to a somnolescent shore like a silk celestial postman posting dreams through heaven’s door, and if you go walking quietly within your waking sleep then you may discover whispers that you really want to keep, dawn’s diamond rains may still remain, to soak into your heart yet the postman keeps the letters with your dreams and fears apart, while sorting truths from tethered lies is all you really need to do for some words fade encased in shade, yet others stay your whole life through.
Sometimes, sometimes is not enough, especially in always hearts and they complain, although the rain makes flowers bloom, and then departs, for hearts need flowers all year round, and not just at brief times of day they need to drift on fragrant winds,the kind that make them dance and Pray, yet even when the road is long, and sleep lies heavy on their eyes they seek the solace of a dream that wraps them in such soft surprise, and all in all each day strolls through within each azure tinted eye, until the pen runs out of ink, no need to write a last goodbye...
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Post by carolann on Oct 21, 2010 12:33:37 GMT -5
Magnificient piece of poetry Keith especially loved 2nd stanza, the thought of a celestial postman posting dreams through heaven's door is just wonderful. thank you for this.
carolann
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Post by Sharon on Oct 21, 2010 14:51:12 GMT -5
exquisite poetry, thanks for posting!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Oct 22, 2010 7:34:18 GMT -5
excellent poem, Keith
ENJOY your award!
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Post by Reggie on Oct 22, 2010 8:38:34 GMT -5
fabulous poem, CONGRATS on the POTW award!
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