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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 10:30:30 GMT -5
I BLEED
tears disperse inside rain broken life echoes hollow torn dreams gently fade inside my soul, I bleed
©2010 Lisa Arnold
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Post by Alicia on Nov 4, 2010 10:45:36 GMT -5
excellent Lisa!
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Post by Betty on Nov 4, 2010 11:06:27 GMT -5
wonderful job Lisa
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Post by Toni on Nov 4, 2010 13:14:29 GMT -5
excellent quatrain Lisa!
enjoyed this much!
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Post by Reggie on Nov 4, 2010 13:52:28 GMT -5
::)an amazing little gem Lisa, love it
great image used
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Post by Carin on Nov 4, 2010 14:07:51 GMT -5
another great write Lisa!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:13:14 GMT -5
thanks so much
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:13:51 GMT -5
wonderful job Lisa ;D dear Betty
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:14:44 GMT -5
excellent quatrain Lisa! enjoyed this much! many thanks to you for dropping by Toni
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:15:30 GMT -5
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:16:36 GMT -5
another great write Lisa! thanks Carin
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Post by Brianna on Nov 4, 2010 14:35:24 GMT -5
:-/fantastic poem Lisa...I really love your style
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Nov 4, 2010 14:47:35 GMT -5
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 4, 2010 15:01:29 GMT -5
Lisa, each word has a meaning that leads to the next, weaving a stunning ensemble of one single , impactful image... a world-class gift!! i go ... whoo!
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Post by Sierra on Nov 5, 2010 0:23:38 GMT -5
wow Lisa, this is haunting and so beautifuly written!
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