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Post by b4sunset on Nov 18, 2010 14:59:12 GMT -5
thumb marks on a sodium-lit boulevard thirsting for irises behind veils of chalked bodies ebbing on consonants of newfound emotions. of emotions vague yet wanting in some shape of petals rising from the bed of angel chrysanthemums, yes, that which boom with ember tapping seedless hearts. no one blames the silent owls for they too have silent flaming eyes. and emotions unknown play a flute to stir, to stir. on a wintry eve, the saffron sky tumbles on its head. a pulse clicks summoning the sidewalks to nibble chords of orchestral gurgling, the slow rustling of hips circling the roundness of the moaning wind rocking the whistling breaths of those who now see the sound of ruffling runes. they scribble notes on throats purring for the next words to ride the carousel of music buried in chilled, now thrilled bones. then the graceful dance, the dance wraps the stars cellophane drunk. of such emotions reflecting the riot of navels praising the wild communion of body and heart
of emotions elegant, wanton, unnamed by many stars. [/center] nenette
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Post by johan on Nov 18, 2010 16:51:56 GMT -5
What can I say Nenette, again you have excelled, you write with a touch of magic as always.
Andrew
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Post by sunny on Nov 18, 2010 21:21:43 GMT -5
It is very well written B4 Pal! :-/breath-taken thoughts and profound insight! specially your title, and your ending line! what a brilliant mind!
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Post by Bob on Nov 19, 2010 3:48:55 GMT -5
wonderful poem!
ENJOY your award!
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Post by Treasure on Nov 19, 2010 12:53:07 GMT -5
CONGRATS on the POTW award!
wonderful poem!
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Post by Sierra on Nov 19, 2010 22:49:07 GMT -5
CONGRATS on POTD...wonderfully penned!
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Post by Charles on Nov 20, 2010 12:16:47 GMT -5
CONGRATS, well-done b4!
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Post by Sara on Nov 21, 2010 1:43:34 GMT -5
well-done Nenette
CONGRATS to you for POTW
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:47:44 GMT -5
BOB: what fun to see you here.. thanks for the thumbs up!
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:48:24 GMT -5
Treasure, much delighted to have you around! ;D
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:49:45 GMT -5
Andrew, i am honored with your remarks, friend! keep the pen gliding..;D
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:50:49 GMT -5
Sierra, smiling at you for visiting this thread.. thank you!!
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:52:20 GMT -5
Sara, such joy to hear from you.. thanks for your good tidings!
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:54:02 GMT -5
My deep appreciation for this award, dear echoes crew... happiness!!
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Post by b4sunset on Nov 24, 2010 9:58:54 GMT -5
Charles, a pleasure to see you on this page... ;D
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