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Post by macmcgovern on Jan 20, 2011 13:33:44 GMT -5
Fought on bitter fields tainted red Revolution quells garroted oppression Emporté-moi the cry Engagement protects treasured belief Declaration defines a people Oration warns tread not on me Muskets herald the voice of freedomAttachments:
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Jan 20, 2011 14:06:04 GMT -5
wow, this is a great and well-written and expressed acrostic, love it!
thanks for posting!
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Post by Eddie on Jan 20, 2011 15:05:28 GMT -5
wow, this is super fanstastic Mac
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Post by johan on Jan 20, 2011 16:19:23 GMT -5
A great Acrostic piece Mac, couldn't have put it better, nice.
Johan
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Post by Lola on Jan 20, 2011 16:38:17 GMT -5
wonderful acrostic poem!
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Post by Alicia on Jan 20, 2011 17:22:35 GMT -5
well-done!
I love this style!
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Post by sunny on Jan 20, 2011 23:05:50 GMT -5
It is very talent, skillful way of poetry! very cleaver, very smart! more so it seems have such fun to read and to cheer!
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Post by heart2heart on Jan 21, 2011 0:40:11 GMT -5
Loved your acroustic, those can be tricky but yours is wonderful. Should that be "herald" in the last line ? Or "heard" perhaps ? Any case, a treat to read. Heart2Heart
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Post by Betty on Jan 21, 2011 1:31:44 GMT -5
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Post by Sierra on Jan 21, 2011 18:14:16 GMT -5
CONGRATS on your award
well-done
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