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Post by b4sunset on Apr 28, 2011 7:53:32 GMT -5
hello morning, good gracious sunrise! the many harbingers of life are seamless at the hems like satin threads weaving carpets of dawn’s carousel rides…
fluffy, fluted and fiery.
this journey embedded by walks where dewdrops upon toes tickle on splendor of new dreams, a magical discovery enshrined on souls bathed in the brink of hope, heralding the buzz of bees and honeyed weeds.
if your time is like mine, subtle as the softening sunrise hiding beneath crisp branches of hillsides sturdy yet gentle almost clockwork orange daily, then sing with me, till the light breaks into million aurora strobes while baby clouds crown the heap of heart and smile at the windows of chirping leaves. ring the bell for some seconds as a roulette of rippling tracks spin this endless, sinless blaze…
slowly, softly, subtly.
hello morning, good gracious sunrise! sometime, someday when i grow gray hairs in hillsides silvery with golden reveries, my bouquets of sunrise stories will unfurl… i'll get there. someday. -N-
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Post by Sara on Apr 28, 2011 8:10:46 GMT -5
excellent write Nenette!
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Post by rrw on Apr 28, 2011 8:27:26 GMT -5
Wow! So lyrically beautiful... a warm spring breeze of words and joy for being alive. I wonder, do we get closer to nature as we age? Great sense of "breathing" in this. Your craft is so delicate and so right on the beat. great work!
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Post by Kristi on Apr 28, 2011 8:39:03 GMT -5
enjoyed the read, thanks for posting
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Post by johan on Apr 28, 2011 10:36:47 GMT -5
Wow! Nenette, again you show just how versitile youe pen is, excellence with this poetry.
Johan
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Post by Carin on Apr 28, 2011 16:37:55 GMT -5
wonderfully written!
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Post by Alicia on Apr 28, 2011 18:25:00 GMT -5
great piece b4!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 28, 2011 19:08:35 GMT -5
::)super fantastic writing Nenette! You are such an amazing talented writer! I am blessed to you you and call you a dear friend
:-/I cherish these lines:
"if your time is like mine, subtle as the softening sunrise hiding beneath crisp branches of hillsides sturdy yet gentle almost clockwork orange daily, then sing with me, till the light breaks into million aurora strobes while baby clouds crown the heap of heart and smile at the windows of chirping leaves. ring the bell for some seconds as a roulette of rippling tracks spin this endless, sinless blaze"
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Post by Brian on Apr 29, 2011 2:23:31 GMT -5
wonderful poem b4!
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Post by Lisa Arnold on Apr 29, 2011 9:29:39 GMT -5
:Pwonderful poem Nenette, ENJOY your award
thanks for posting
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Post by Reggie on Apr 29, 2011 22:25:28 GMT -5
CONGRATS Nenette
fantastic write
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Post by Cherrie on Apr 29, 2011 22:46:16 GMT -5
CONGRATS, beautiful poetry b4!
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Post by Joan on May 1, 2011 7:34:31 GMT -5
CONGRATS b4, great job!
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Post by b4sunset on May 17, 2011 12:35:09 GMT -5
Oh, wow.. i can;t thank everyone enough for the greetings, comments and the POTW... so happy you liked this one... thanks!
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